Monday, October 19, 2009

Natural Disaster poem

Peaceful Village
Happy, Peaceful
Playing, Working, Resting
Landslide, Hot mud, Flood,-
Killing, Infecting, Destroying
Horrible, Miserable
Destroyed Village

1 comment:

  1. Excuse me TheMaster, but if I can critique on your poem, can you edit the last word, because if you could please pay attention to the word "VGillage", shouldn't it be spelt "Village". Please refer to that immediately... Thank you for your attention.
    ~green2green~

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